( GAME-WIDE HMD )

[fairyfoes]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Welcome to ED's game-wide HMD! It will go up around the last Wednesday of every app-round month (that is, the month immediately after apps have been processed, so the next HMD will be in August).

How It Works:

The game-wide HMD is an opportunity for players to come together and bring each other feedback about one another's playing. Constructive criticism is what players expect to be given, supported by suggestions for how to better their game-play with evidence backing up any queries or concerns. Always try to post one positive observation at the end of your critique as it gives people something nice to look forward to and helps reassure your fellow EDwardians that hey, we're only playing imaginary people on the internet; this is all for fun!

The game-wide HMD is not mandatory, but we do encourage participation. If you'd prefer to receive crit solely on your personal HMD, away from anonymous assistance, please specify so (and if people do, commentators please respect their wishes!).

Gamewide suggestions should be handled by replying to this Gameplay Suggestions Post!

If you have any problems, let us know by PMing the Mod account.

Anonymous commenting is enabled while the HMD runs to allow anonymous crit and IP logging is on for the sake of continued accountability. Only moderators will see IP addresses and they will only be checked if people play silly buggers situations get out of hand, at a push resulting in anon-crit being turned off. Please remember to be thoughtful and respectful in your crit-giving.

Fill out the form below to get started and remember, fairybros, be excellent to each other!

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<b>PLAYER NAME:</b> <b>CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S):</b> <b>FANDOM(S):</b> <b>PERSONAL HMD(S):</b> <b>ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?:</b> Yes/No <b>ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:</b> Let everyone know here if anything life-changing has happened to your character while they're in game that would otherwise make them different from their canon self or may have changed their personality in some way. Have you been on hiatus? Had any problems regarding your enthusiasm to play recently? Slide those extras here.

Comments

[orcsurfing]

You are so very inclusive and fun to play with and patient, it's really a great pleasure to be playing with you. ♥ Very varied cast of characters and all of them distinct. C: Also great plotty ideas and keeping them all appropriately engaged in the setting. Aaah I'm definitely looking forward to developing more CR with Hermione with the items you suggested. ♥ I'm not at all familiar with Harry Potter (blasphemy, I know), but she's such a fun and sweet and complex character the way you play her already that it just makes me chinhands.

[orcsurfing]

Haha I'm not a seasoned player at all, in all honesty, but I really do enjoy him! I love the dichotomy between how he is towards allies and towards enemies and the subtle ways you include traces of madness in your writing aaaah and how you convey what great orator he is. c:

And yes! I should be able to back and forth today some. C: I'm gonna be making dinner in a bit, but after that I'll be free. /o/ And aah yeah, likewise. SOb beyond the idea I shared with you a while back that would take months to build up to, I'm a bit at a loss, because neither would really willingly come in contact with the other. Though... if Celegorm is close to the Station, oh man, oh man... and Legolas is also starting to come out a lot more and on his own too, so it'd be possible to make them run into each other and I think even without a direction for the thread, it'd prove interesting no matter what.

ALSO I'M GLAD YOU LIKE HIM KAJHF HAHA I got so focused on plotty things I forgot to thank you orz

[boutant]

Oh gosh that's excellent to hear, I worry about him ;; Thank you so much!

[walkingarsenal]

This means a lot to me, thank you so much. ♥! I have to say pretty much the same thing right back, though. You make it really enjoyable to plot and thread with you, and I will always welcome your ideas. *__*

[fatherlordandfool]

Man, I think you've been doing a *fabulous* job! I was honestly worried you might have dropped! I'm super relieved to see that you haven't. :)

You're coming back right around when I have a small couple-day hiatus, but whenever you're free, I have some solid ideas for establishing a great CR!

[fatherlordandfool]

I am not kidding when I say you're one of the best writers I've come across in RP in a long time, and your portrayal of Jon is beautiful.

[brainiest]

fjkdsgj You are the absolute sweetest person in the world and I think my face is permanently stuck like this right now:

[netneutrality]

PLAYER NAME: Jo
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Tokidoki Rikugou | Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Amatsuki
PERSONAL HMD(S): Right here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Whatever you're more comfortable with.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: It's really busy at my job right now, so I'm not around as much as I'd like!

[notavirtue]

TAG FASTER but seriously, I backtag like the dickens, so no worries. Thank you very much, I'm glad you've been enjoying him! He's been a blast to play since I picked him up, and I'm looking forward to the adventures he can have with Legolas!

[baseborne]

Oh my god, thank you so much. This was seriously the nicest thing to come home to tonight! We should totally do more stuff when we both have more free time around the game haha, our threads have been so much fun for me so far.

[all7seas]

PLAYER NAME: Saralinda
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Jack Sparrow/Unseelie
FANDOM(S): POTC
PERSONAL HMD(S):
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Yes/No
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I feel like still finding my place in the game, particularly in such a large world, but I am going to be starting a small arc with Jack soon involving the maiden of Loch Noa. Would also be willing to throw him at player plots.

[all7seas]

I'm already enjoying tagging with your Hiccup! Hope you are feeling better.

[peeta_bread]

PLAYER NAME: Kate
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Peeta Mellark & Unseelie
FANDOM(S): The Hunger Games
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: sure
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I feel pretty good about Peeta, but do bring up any concerns if you have any. I've been struggling with tagging speed a little due to mental and physical health problems. I'm sure I could improve with tagging speed, but can anything else be improved? Does his voice sound right?

[breadmaking]

Oh gosh, thank you so much! I am feeling much better, thank you, and I'm also really enjoying tagging with your Jack. It is absolutely the most amusing CR I have going right now.

[bythewaves]

PLAYER NAME: bookworm
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Maglor, Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Tolkien
PERSONAL HMD(S): LINK
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Am cool however
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I always worry I TLDR too much please warn me if I do?

[skennen]

o> I'd love to hear your ideas whenever you're available!

[lightcatcher]

PLAYER NAME:
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Fëanor & Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Tolkien's Middle Earth Compendium
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: If you have to.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I've had a busy month so I'm tagging slowly and can't react to many things... Also he's from a while past his death, so he's calmed down some and knows some things that he never knew in his life.

[lightcatcher]

I really like what I've seen you doing with him so far - you manage to make him sound just right in speech and actions.

[huge_egomd]

PLAYER NAME: Ali
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Gregory House | Unseelie
FANDOM(S): House MD
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Definitely prefer non-anon, but whatever you're comfortable with
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I probably don't get House as involved as I should but that's the result of knowing how many active threads I can handle at any given time...which is not as many as I'd like.

[digophelia]

PLAYER NAME: Natalie
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Alice Liddell (Unseelie)
FANDOM(S): American McGee's Alice
PERSONAL HMD(S): Listed in Alice's journal!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: If you do, just use the one listed in Alice's journal
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Alice is not the most social, trusting, and warm people and this type of environment has forced her into a situation where she has to work with people. This is also my first month in game, so any feedback is great. I'm also a freelance artist and I do a lot of art on the side, so I know that kind of zaps me creatively; I'm worried my tags get fuzzy.

[netneutrality]

Thank you, I really appreciate that!