( GAME-WIDE HMD )

[fairyfoes]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Welcome to ED's game-wide HMD! It will go up around the last Wednesday of every app-round month (that is, the month immediately after apps have been processed, so the next HMD will be in August).

How It Works:

The game-wide HMD is an opportunity for players to come together and bring each other feedback about one another's playing. Constructive criticism is what players expect to be given, supported by suggestions for how to better their game-play with evidence backing up any queries or concerns. Always try to post one positive observation at the end of your critique as it gives people something nice to look forward to and helps reassure your fellow EDwardians that hey, we're only playing imaginary people on the internet; this is all for fun!

The game-wide HMD is not mandatory, but we do encourage participation. If you'd prefer to receive crit solely on your personal HMD, away from anonymous assistance, please specify so (and if people do, commentators please respect their wishes!).

Gamewide suggestions should be handled by replying to this Gameplay Suggestions Post!

If you have any problems, let us know by PMing the Mod account.

Anonymous commenting is enabled while the HMD runs to allow anonymous crit and IP logging is on for the sake of continued accountability. Only moderators will see IP addresses and they will only be checked if people play silly buggers situations get out of hand, at a push resulting in anon-crit being turned off. Please remember to be thoughtful and respectful in your crit-giving.

Fill out the form below to get started and remember, fairybros, be excellent to each other!

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<b>PLAYER NAME:</b> <b>CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S):</b> <b>FANDOM(S):</b> <b>PERSONAL HMD(S):</b> <b>ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?:</b> Yes/No <b>ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:</b> Let everyone know here if anything life-changing has happened to your character while they're in game that would otherwise make them different from their canon self or may have changed their personality in some way. Have you been on hiatus? Had any problems regarding your enthusiasm to play recently? Slide those extras here.

Comments

[skennen]

PLAYER NAME: PQ
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Connor (Ratonhnhaké:ton) - Seelie
FANDOM(S): Assassin's Creed
PERSONAL HMD(S): HMD
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: I don't mind it.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Just disappeared for a couple weeks and won't be back on tags for another day or two. Apologies! Something came up offline and I'm still working through it, really should have hiatused outright. Kind of struggling settling into the game besides that; Connor gets plenty of nice conversations but nailing down CR to actually do stuff with has proven a challenge given his personality/priorities/goals and the big, sprawling setting.

[boutant]

PLAYER NAME: Gadgets
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Ariadne/Unseelie, John 'Reaper' Grimm/Seelie, Jake Lonergan/Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Inception/Doom/Cowboys & Aliens
PERSONAL HMD(S): Ariadne/John/Jake
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Not preferred, but always an option!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I want to do some definite canon reviewing for Ariadne. John's also far more comfortable than he's been in some time because being in a war = excuse not to think about all his dead friends, oops.

[whereyouneedme]

PLAYER NAME: Corie
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Aveline Hendyr | Seelie
FANDOM(S): Dragon Age 2
PERSONAL HMD(S): HMD
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: up to the player.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Being new, I'm still dipping my toes in. Due to circumstances that are lame my attention has been all over the place lately so I know that my activity has been spotty. Also playing Aveline, I worry that she either comes off too stern or boring - or when she replies with snark, too far? I don't know. If you notice anything off, please let me know!

[rube]

PLAYER NAME: bella
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): ben hawkins & seelie
FANDOM(S): carnivàle
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: whatever works!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: i was on hiatus for a bit, but that was a few weeks ago! i know i've been a bit slow, but rl is finally giving me some time to get back into the swing of things! as far as ben is concerned, he's pretty antisocial and he doesn't reach out to talk to people much, which he's working on, and i'm trying to find different ways he can get to know people instead of being a little doofus

[bratking]

PLAYER NAME: Cass
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Joffrey Baratheon / Unseelie
FANDOM(S): A Song of Ice and Fire
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: I'm fine with it.

[nobleminded]

PLAYER NAME: Kaito
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Elliot Nightray, Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Pandora Hearts
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: I'm not against it
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Something life-changing (more like ending) happened just before he came here, and as implied we never saw what affect that would have on him.

[seaside_cherry]

PLAYER NAME:Witty
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S):Sono Chieri & Unseelie
FANDOM(S): AKB0048
PERSONAL HMD(S): HMD
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Go for it
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I'm new to the game and know I've been quite slow, I'm adjusting to it still and am trying to work on that. Any commentary on my play is welcome.

[notavirtue]

PLAYER NAME: Fastback
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Javik | Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Mass Effect
PERSONAL HMD(S): HMD
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Whatever works for you
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I'm very sorry for the lack of airlock jokes.

[erythristic]

PLAYER NAME: Mira
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Grell Sutcliffe, Elijah Elkwood | Unseelie both
FANDOM(S): Black Butler and Todd Allison and the Petunia Violet
PERSONAL HMD(S): hers and his
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Perfectly acceptable.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: In general, I've been somewhat scattered this month and so haven't been as timely as I'd like to be with my comments, I'm sorry about that. Additionally, Elijah's a trickier character for me to find my feet with, so if anyone has anything I could do better to help him settle in, please let me know!

[oursavinggrace]

PLAYER NAME: Kelly
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Jason Grace (Seelie)
FANDOM(S): Percy Jackson & the Olympians / Heroes of Olympus
PERSONAL HMD(S): Got one right over here if you'd prefer using that, anon is on and ip logging is off!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Sure
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Nothing in particlar! Feel free to hit me up wherever if you have any crit, I'm always looking to improve!

[justike]

PLAYER NAME: Mint
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Ike & Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Fire Emblem Tellius
PERSONAL HMD(S): here!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: sure, if you want
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: idk nothing in particular! Canonblind feedback is always good too. If there's anything I can do to make him easier to play off of, let me know.

[bird_brain]

PLAYER NAME: Kel
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Aubri | Seelie
FANDOM(S): Mercedes Lackey's Mage Wars trilogy
PERSONAL HMD(S): Right here!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Go ahead.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Activity has been a little more sporadic than I would like, thanks to some RL stuff going down of late and I haven't tagged out as much as I wanted to. That said, I'm always open to being poked for tags/plots/whatever or for HMDing. If you ever want a thread with Aubri, please never hesitate to just ask!

[breadmaking]

PLAYER NAME: Alyssa
CHARACTER & COURT: Hiccup Horrendous Haddock III & Seelie
FANDOM: How to Train Your Dragon
PERSONAL HMD: here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: I'm fine either way.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I was on hiatus from the end of April to basically the beginning of June due to being in the hospital, so I haven't gotten Hiccup out and around much and I'm sort of behind, plot-wise. But! I am working more on it now, trying to get him more CR and whatnot.

[walkingarsenal]

PLAYER NAME: Terra.
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Fíli & Seelie.
FANDOM(S): Tolkien.
PERSONAL HMD(S): Over here.
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: I'd be fine with it.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I'm planning to get more involved in things, now that I don't have RL stuff hanging over my head. I'm sorry for the extreme slowness and lack of tagging around this month, though.

[chiabrows]

PLAYER NAME: Onion.
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Lamont Toucey (Unseelie).
FANDOM(S): Hanna is Not a Boy's Name.
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here.
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Anon crit is okay on this post! Otherwise, my personal HMD does not have anon enabled.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: This was Monty's first month here, and I've had a bit of trouble getting him acclimated, so he's been fairly sparse. His CR meme post is here if you're interested in threading with him!

[baseborne]

PLAYER NAME: Rad
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Jon Snow (Seelie)
FANDOM(S): A Song of Ice and Fire
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Anything goes.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I've been working a looot of overtime lately, so my tags have been slow and sparse all month because by the time I get home I'm pooped. Hopefully starting in July that will be over, though!

[dappergent]

PLAYER NAME: Parsnip
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Oscar Vessalius | Seelie Court
FANDOM(S): Pandora Hearts
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Preferred logged in but won't say no to anon.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I have a flexible work schedule so some days I work 8.5 hours and others 10+ so tagging can sometimes be really sporadic but I do try to stay on top of my threads!

[netneutrality]

PLAYER NAME: Jo
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Tokidoki Rikugou | Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Amatsuki
PERSONAL HMD(S): Right here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Whatever you're more comfortable with.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: It's really busy at my job right now, so I'm not around as much as I'd like!

[all7seas]

PLAYER NAME: Saralinda
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Jack Sparrow/Unseelie
FANDOM(S): POTC
PERSONAL HMD(S):
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Yes/No
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I feel like still finding my place in the game, particularly in such a large world, but I am going to be starting a small arc with Jack soon involving the maiden of Loch Noa. Would also be willing to throw him at player plots.

[peeta_bread]

PLAYER NAME: Kate
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Peeta Mellark & Unseelie
FANDOM(S): The Hunger Games
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: sure
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I feel pretty good about Peeta, but do bring up any concerns if you have any. I've been struggling with tagging speed a little due to mental and physical health problems. I'm sure I could improve with tagging speed, but can anything else be improved? Does his voice sound right?

[bythewaves]

PLAYER NAME: bookworm
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Maglor, Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Tolkien
PERSONAL HMD(S): LINK
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Am cool however
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I always worry I TLDR too much please warn me if I do?

[lightcatcher]

PLAYER NAME:
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Fëanor & Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Tolkien's Middle Earth Compendium
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: If you have to.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I've had a busy month so I'm tagging slowly and can't react to many things... Also he's from a while past his death, so he's calmed down some and knows some things that he never knew in his life.

[huge_egomd]

PLAYER NAME: Ali
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Gregory House | Unseelie
FANDOM(S): House MD
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Definitely prefer non-anon, but whatever you're comfortable with
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I probably don't get House as involved as I should but that's the result of knowing how many active threads I can handle at any given time...which is not as many as I'd like.

[digophelia]

PLAYER NAME: Natalie
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Alice Liddell (Unseelie)
FANDOM(S): American McGee's Alice
PERSONAL HMD(S): Listed in Alice's journal!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: If you do, just use the one listed in Alice's journal
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Alice is not the most social, trusting, and warm people and this type of environment has forced her into a situation where she has to work with people. This is also my first month in game, so any feedback is great. I'm also a freelance artist and I do a lot of art on the side, so I know that kind of zaps me creatively; I'm worried my tags get fuzzy.