(GAME-WIDE HMD)

[fairyfoes]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Welcome to ED's game-wide HMD! It will go up around the last Wednesday of every app-round month (that is, the month immediately after apps have been processed, so the next HMD will be in October).

How It Works:

The game-wide HMD is an opportunity for players to come together and bring each other feedback about one another's playing. Constructive criticism is what players expect to be given, supported by suggestions for how to better their game-play with evidence backing up any queries or concerns. Always try to post one positive observation at the end of your critique as it gives people something nice to look forward to and helps reassure your fellow EDwardians that hey, we're only playing imaginary people on the internet; this is all for fun!

The game-wide HMD is not mandatory, but we do encourage participation. If you'd prefer to receive crit solely on your personal HMD, away from anonymous assistance, please specify so (and if people do, commentators please respect their wishes!).

Gamewide suggestions should be handled by replying to this Gameplay Suggestions Post!

If you have any problems, let us know by PMing the Mod account.

Anonymous commenting is enabled while the HMD runs to allow anonymous crit and IP logging is on for the sake of continued accountability. Only moderators will see IP addresses and they will only be checked if people play silly buggers situations get out of hand, at a push resulting in anon-crit being turned off. Please remember to be thoughtful and respectful in your crit-giving.

Fill out the form below to get started and remember, fairybros, be excellent to each other!

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<b>PLAYER NAME:</b> <b>CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S):</b> <b>FANDOM(S):</b> <b>PERSONAL HMD(S):</b> <b>ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?:</b> Yes/No <b>ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:</b> Let everyone know here if anything life-changing has happened to your character while they're in game that would otherwise make them different from their canon self or may have changed their personality in some way. Have you been on hiatus? Had any problems regarding your enthusiasm to play recently? Slide those extras here.

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[isitapony]

PLAYER NAME: Harley
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Stiles Stilinski (SEELIE) | Veronica Mars (UNSEELIE)
FANDOM(S): Teen Wolf | Veronica Mars
PERSONAL HMD(S): Stiles | Veronica
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Up to the crit leaver.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Nothing I can think of.

[bolincredible]

PLAYER NAME: Dani
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Bolin | Seelie
FANDOM(S): Avatar: Legend of Korra
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Yeah sure!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: idk about the life-changing front or anything. He's definitely been busy and I've had to exercise my down-to-business serious thinking for him, though! I know that my speed can be on the really low side sometimes. I'm basically up for hearing about anything.

[choreographics]

PLAYER NAME: Ty
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Ryan Evans | Seelie
FANDOM(S): High School Musical
PERSONAL HMD(S): Yup
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Go ahead
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Truth be told, I'm still trying to find Ryan's footing in the game. Also sometimes I feel like maybe he's too flat to thread with since he's very normal and trying to get used to the lay of Drabwurld. Any crit would be fantastic.

[noirant]

PLAYER NAME: Kate.
CHARACTER(S) & FANDOM(S) & COURT(S):
Felix Harrowgate || Doctrine of Labryinths || Unseelie.
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here.
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Fine by me!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
> New to EC, and to playing Felix in a game.
> Had a slowatus mid-August, and lost track of some tags.
> Comments & crit are always super welcome, whether for characterization or general gameplay.

[orcsurfing]

PLAYER NAME: Blanche
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Legolas & Seelie...ish
FANDOM(S): Tolkien
PERSONAL HMD(S): here!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Sure!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I've had a terrible tagging month all across the board, games and PSLs and playing in small bursts that petered out quickly, so I'm trying to work through that. :( Otherwise, Legolas is returning to his former self ever so slowly, recovering from the abuse and everything that happened in the last months, though he'll be trying to act more proper now that he is a leader in times of what's war, but without losing the sense of himself.

[extramural]

PLAYER NAME: Gadgets
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): The Outsider (UNSEELIE) | Ariadne (UNSEELIE) | John Grimm (SEELIE)
FANDOM(S): Dishonored | Inception | Doom
PERSONAL HMD(S): The Outsider | Ariadne | John Grimm
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: If you're more comfortable, though I will ask that you check back to see if I've replied -- I like to have discussions and ask for ideas for improvement, etc.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: The Outsider back home is not into interference. As you can imagine that makes him difficult to play in a game setting, so in the Drabwurld he's taking a slightly more active role -- he doesn't know and see everything about this world, so he's having to immerse himself and maybe even get his hands dirty.

[erythristic]

PLAYER NAME: Mira
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Grell Sutcliffe | Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Black Butler
PERSONAL HMD(S): over here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Up to crit giver
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I've been trying to keep my tagging speed consistent, though I have been somewhat slow given that school started back up this month. On the IC side, I know that I have difficulty sometimes making Grell as dramatic as she should be, so any advice on that front would be much appreciated!

[fairbrook]

PLAYER NAME: Jiyu
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Integra Hellsing ( Seelie )
FANDOM(S): Hellsing
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Go for it!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I would like to note I've been on hiatus this month, so I've been slow at best. Additionally, I've been meaning to branch out more for Integra, though given her taciturn nature it's been difficult.

[nottame]

PLAYER NAME: Blue
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Alexia Ashford (Unseelie) | Anthony (Seelie) | Toboe (Seelie)
FANDOM(S): Resident Evil | Eternal Darkness | Wolf's Rain
PERSONAL HMD(S): Alexia | Anthony | Toboe
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: It's welcome!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Apologies for an activity lapse early-midway through the month; regained my flow with Anthony and Toboe momentum-wise, but uncertain about Alexia. 8|a Apart from that, grateful for any crit you might have on characterization, tagging style, or other!

[admirably]

PLAYER NAME: bayley
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): hans / unseelie
FANDOM(S): frozen
PERSONAL HMD(S): here!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: feel free.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: this is my first time playing hans and my first time playing consistently in a game for awhile, so any feedback is much appreciated!

[bythewaves]

PLAYER NAME: bookworm
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Maglor | Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Tolkien
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Hit me~
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: ... well he's literally fading away of grief and general "I hate the world" right now? OTHERWISE I dunno, I need to tag out more I think =|9

[devotedqueen]

PLAYER NAME: Kiwi
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Enma Kozato (earthsend) and Elincia Ridell Crimea
FANDOM(S): KHR! and Fire Emblem Tellius
PERSONAL HMD(S): CHECK MY JOURNALS.
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Yes
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
Any advice on either of my characters would be greatly appreciated.

[quest]

PLAYER NAME: A
CHARACTER & COURT: Percy Jackson | Seelie
FANDOM: Percy Jackson
PERSONAL HMD(S): here!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: If that's what makes you most comfortable, sure!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Percy is still super new to me, so if anything seems off about him, or if you feel like I'm missing something in my writing fo him, I'm more than happy to listen while I get settled into his character!

[tawarwaith]

PLAYER NAME: Lills
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Tauriel Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Tolkien
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Go ahead
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I know I tag inconsistently due to real life obligations and occasionally I do loose a thread or two. Please feel free to poke me about s tag if you feel that it has been dropped or neglected. As always I am very open to crit or advice about my character. I'd love to hear feedback either way.

[baseborne]

PLAYER NAME: Rad
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Jon Snow (Seelie)
FANDOM(S): ASOIAF
PERSONAL HMD(S): boop
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Yes
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I'm super extremely slow and I'm sorry. Work is the worst. :(

[inafadingcrown]

PLAYER NAME: Beth
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Galadriel (Seelie)
FANDOM(S): Tolkien
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Sure
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Oh, boy have my tagging speed and activity level been weird. I'm just coming out of a period of prolonged health issues and learning to deal with school and hopefully a job soon, so bear with me for a bit as things continue to settle. I think I've been better lately, though. I'm making it a goal to tag around more.

[dragmire]

PLAYER NAME: Masa
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Ganondorf (UNSEELIE) | Gendry (SEELIE) | Spike (UNSEELIE)
FANDOM(S): The Legend of Zelda | A Song of Ice and Fire | Buffy the Vampire Slayer
PERSONAL HMD(S): Ganon | Gendry | Spike
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Your choice
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: N/A

[oursavinggrace]

PLAYER NAME: kelly
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): jason grace (seelie) & saralegui (unseelie)
FANDOM(S): pjp & kkm, respectively
PERSONAL HMD(S): jason / saralegui
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: go for it
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: nothing in particular! come at me, i'm always down with crit of any sort.

[greenies]

PLAYER NAME: Sisi
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Thomas Edison (UNSEELIE)
FANDOM(S): The Maze Runner
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here.
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: If you want.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I've been glacially slow for the past two weeks or so, since I was moving into my new house and then getting settled at school, but now that I'm here, things should hopefully move a little faster! ♥

[vrykolakas]

PLAYER NAME: the wizard of orls
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): The Brucolac | Unseelie
FANDOM(S): The Scar
PERSONAL HMD(S): help yourself
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Up to you!

[dappergent]

PLAYER NAME:
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Oscar Vessalius | Seelie
FANDOM(S): Pandora Hearts
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: not preferred but definitely allowed! Just check back in case I need clarification on the advice being given.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Was on hiatus for July due to a two week vacation mid-month and then it took me a while to really get resettled with Oscar. I think the last two weeks of throwing him at random strangers has really helped though and I'll keep pushing to expand and develop Oscar's CR to make sure I have a firm holding with him in the game!

[floralteas]

PLAYER NAME: Grey
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Shiro Yoshiwara / unseelie
FANDOM(S): Adekan
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: I would prefer anon tbh.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: --

[embattle]

PLAYER NAME: Ushayo
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Hibari Kyoya | Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
PERSONAL HMD(S): HMD
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: If you prefer!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I'm honestly still a bit shy about branching out his CR. Maybe more than a bit. Hibari is equal parts mischievous and dangerous, so I hope it all comes across without losing his youthful edge.

[caditquaestio]

PLAYER NAME: ruxi
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Cesare Borgia ( Unseelie )
FANDOM(S): Cesare
PERSONAL HMD(S): Hit iiiiiiiiiit.
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Go wild, friend. Go wild.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: ...I'm RPing an emotionally-stunted character who is RPing a decent human being, who is in turn RPing a Renaissance FedEx rep, which means I'll invariably mess up at some point during this RPception. So, if something's not working right for you, please let me know, it'd be of great help!

[disfavored]

PLAYER NAME: Cass
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Tarrlok / Seelie
FANDOM(S): Legend of Korra
PERSONAL HMD(S): Yes!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Yes
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I unexpectedly got hired for a job in July which has been taking up a lot of my time and thus slowing down my average tagging speed, but tomorrow (Friday) is actually my last day before I go back to school. Also, I switched from hotmail to gmail and have still been working out a few bugs (especially with the mobile version marking things as read when I don't want that...) so if I ever miss a tag feel free to poke me.

[rube]

PLAYER NAME: bella
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): effy stonem ( unseelie ) | ben hawkins ( seelie )
FANDOM(S): skins & carnivàle
PERSONAL HMD(S): effy's & ben's
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: up to you!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: i've been a liiittle sidetracked with a new job (i forgot how exhausting standing up for 8 hours and dealing with people can be), but since then i think i've settled a bit.

[knightscode]

PLAYER NAME: Jack
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Lancelot (SEELIE)
FANDOM(S): BBC Merlin
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: I'd rather not! If I have done something wrong I'd rather you just talk to me about it directly. I do not bite, I promise!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
I have slowed down the last week or two dramatically -- apologies, I've been training a freelancer at work and it has sapped all my energy terribly. I'm trying to make sure I keep bouncing back plot-relevant things efficiently but if something slips feel free to draw my attention back to it.

MODS

[fairyfoes]

PLAYER NAME: The Mod Team!
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Various
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Either!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: We've slowly become much more active in steering the overarching game plot, which means more than just running major events! We have contacted players for updates via PM, helped to run several small solo scenes, and given many players what we hope has been a leg up in running their own player plots!

[blundergirl]

PLAYER NAME: Koree
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Cassie (Wonder Girl) + Koriand'r (Starfire); Seelie
FANDOM(S): Young Justice and Teen Titans; animated versions
PERSONAL HMD(S): Cassie's and Kori's
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: If you prefer it
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: We're just exiting BTS season at my job, and my tagging drive was suffering a lot for it while that was going on. I'm hoping that I'll make a full recovery now that it's done this week/end.

Nothing really life changing for either character, but it's worth noting that Cassie voluntarily stayed behind only because another friend did and she wanted to look out for them, if that's a concern for anyone.

[mesmerism]

PLAYER NAME: Megan
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Piper McLean | Seelie
FANDOM(S): Heroes of Olympus
PERSONAL HMD(S): { here }
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Allowed, if you track the comment thread in case we need to discuss something.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Piper's voice is shaky for me at times, and I feel a little intimidated about trying to match play styles here. I tend to write as much detail as I feel is needed to either get the point across or just hint at it, and I'm unsure if I need to be writing more? I don't want to force myself to sound unnatural in my prose so either this is something I need to work on, or something that's not necessary.

[arms]

PLAYER NAME: Snow
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Minho (Unseelie)
FANDOM(S): The Maze Runner
PERSONAL HMD(S): boop
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Sure.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I want to apologize for how scarce I've been. Between helping Sisi move in and us not having internet for a bit, and then getting resettled back at my place with a couple offline issues to take care of, I've been a little sluggish. But I'm getting back into the swing of things and will be backtagging galore to make up for everything.

[notavirtue]

PLAYER NAME: Fastback
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Javik | Unseelie
FANDOM(S): Mass Effect
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Fine by me!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Nope.

Saralinda

[all7seas]

PLAYER NAME: Saralinda
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Jack Sparrow | Unseelie
FANDOM(S): POTC
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Whatever, either way is fine.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:

[commandertoolbelt]

PLAYER NAME: Ray
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Leo Valdez, Seelie
FANDOM(S): Percy Jackson / Heroes of Olympus
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: sure
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Nothing really, I've just had some issues figuring out what's going on and getting involved with stuff. Hoping to change that!

[atoned]

PLAYER NAME: Jade.
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Luke Castellan (SEELIE) | Zuko (UNSEELIE)
FANDOM(S): PJO | ATLA
PERSONAL HMD(S): DEMIGOD | FIREBENDER
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: it's up to you.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: motivation has been pretty low over the last two months and has affected my tagging speed, so I'm working on ways to alter my pace and breathe enthusiasm back into the things I take on. rl is rl, it's a juggling act I'm still trying to perfect. I'm mostly concerned about character voices — they're both new to me, Zuko more than Luke. are they dumb enough? should Zuko mention honour more?

[peeta_bread]

PLAYER NAME: Kate
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Peeta Mellark, Unseelie
FANDOM(S): The Hunger Games
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: sure
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I've been on hiatus most of the month, but I'm open to any crit.

[shadow_spread]

PLAYER NAME: Orlando
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Masamori Sumimura (Unseelie) & Orlando Gardiner (Seelie)
FANDOM(S): Kekkaishi and Otherland
PERSONAL HMD(S): Masamori and Orlando
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Go ahead
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: RL's been pretty hectic this month but I'm hoping to focus properly on the game now that things are getting a little more stable.

[knightspirit]

PLAYER NAME: aluria
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): tsurugi kyousuke (seelie)
FANDOM(S): inazuma eleven go
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: either/or
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: come at me bros

[ex_audacity56]

PLAYER NAME: Zephy
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Jem Walker & Unseelie
FANDOM(S): In the Flesh
PERSONAL HMD(S): here.
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: sure!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: N/A

[bird_brain]

PLAYER NAME: Kel
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Aubri | Seelie & Idril | Seelie
FANDOM(S): Mage Wars trilogy and Tolkien
PERSONAL HMD(S): here!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: I will take it!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: I've been a little more inconsistent than I would like because a lot of RL things have been happening of late. If I've missed something, please please let me know. My mind is a sieve lately.

[thebreakingwave]

PLAYER NAME: Takh
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Harry Potter in Unseelie
FANDOM(S): HPverse
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: No, thanks.

[vanyel_ashkevron]

PLAYER NAME: Riddle
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Vanyel Ashkevron (SEELIE)
FANDOM(S): The Last Herald-Mage
PERSONAL HMD(S): At the top of his journal!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: If it's handled maturely, anon is fine. I want the commenter to be comfortable.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: There is so much I want to do with Van. He'll be poking his nose into all sorts of things. Because he wants to keep people safe.

[metalica]

PLAYER NAME: Rachel
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S):
Hermione Granger | Harry Potter | Seelie
Renly Baratheon | ASOIAF | Seelie
Erik Lehnsherr | X-Men | Unseelie
PERSONAL HMD(S): Hermione | Renly | Erik
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Sure
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Hermione has been kidnapped and that's going to influence her a bit :T And Erik is being a lot sneakier and awkward than usual because of the time difference between himself and Charles and the threat from that + Morla. c:

[gentlearcher]

PLAYER NAME: Shira
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Susan (Seelie)
FANDOM(S): The Chronicles of Narnia
PERSONAL HMD(S): here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: If you prefer
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Not that I can think of as of yet.

[of_the_lake]

PLAYER NAME: Dan
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Berserker/Lancelot (UNSEELIE)
FANDOM(S): Fate/Zero
PERSONAL HMD(S): Here!
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: I don't mind either!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Lancelot has recently found a reason to live through exposure to Seelie tactics! He believes he has to operate as a hero, now, which is bad--because as a hero, he's questing to gather forces for the Unseelie court.

[aliased]

PLAYER NAME: laura
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): arya stark - seelie
FANDOM(S): a song of ice and fire
PERSONAL HMD(S): hmd
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: sure!
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: rl has taken a turn for the exciting so i've been slow and bad about dropping tags. i'm sorry for that.

[ziggyzoggy]

PLAYER NAME: Coffee
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Vol'jin, Unseelie newbie.
FANDOM(S): Warcraft
PERSONAL HMD(S): Over here
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Lay it on me.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Still feeling out how much of the accent I want to mess with. Cause I'd rather my comments were READABLE...