(GAME-WIDE HMD)

[fairyfoes]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Welcome to ED's game-wide HMD! It will go up around the last Wednesday of every app-round month (that is, the month immediately after apps have been processed, so the next HMD will be in October).

How It Works:

The game-wide HMD is an opportunity for players to come together and bring each other feedback about one another's playing. Constructive criticism is what players expect to be given, supported by suggestions for how to better their game-play with evidence backing up any queries or concerns. Always try to post one positive observation at the end of your critique as it gives people something nice to look forward to and helps reassure your fellow EDwardians that hey, we're only playing imaginary people on the internet; this is all for fun!

The game-wide HMD is not mandatory, but we do encourage participation. If you'd prefer to receive crit solely on your personal HMD, away from anonymous assistance, please specify so (and if people do, commentators please respect their wishes!).

Gamewide suggestions should be handled by replying to this Gameplay Suggestions Post!

If you have any problems, let us know by PMing the Mod account.

Anonymous commenting is enabled while the HMD runs to allow anonymous crit and IP logging is on for the sake of continued accountability. Only moderators will see IP addresses and they will only be checked if people play silly buggers situations get out of hand, at a push resulting in anon-crit being turned off. Please remember to be thoughtful and respectful in your crit-giving.

Fill out the form below to get started and remember, fairybros, be excellent to each other!

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<b>PLAYER NAME:</b> <b>CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S):</b> <b>FANDOM(S):</b> <b>PERSONAL HMD(S):</b> <b>ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?:</b> Yes/No <b>ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:</b> Let everyone know here if anything life-changing has happened to your character while they're in game that would otherwise make them different from their canon self or may have changed their personality in some way. Have you been on hiatus? Had any problems regarding your enthusiasm to play recently? Slide those extras here.

Comments

[mesmerism]

PLAYER NAME: Megan
CHARACTER(S) & COURT(S): Piper McLean | Seelie
FANDOM(S): Heroes of Olympus
PERSONAL HMD(S): { here }
ANONYMOUS CRIT WANTED?: Allowed, if you track the comment thread in case we need to discuss something.
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: Piper's voice is shaky for me at times, and I feel a little intimidated about trying to match play styles here. I tend to write as much detail as I feel is needed to either get the point across or just hint at it, and I'm unsure if I need to be writing more? I don't want to force myself to sound unnatural in my prose so either this is something I need to work on, or something that's not necessary.